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Oscar:
Overall, it was a decent paper, though rather short. You could definitely go more in-depth in the data analysis section, especially in terms of answering your hypothesis/thesis.

Your formatting is good throughout, and your discussion section was very nice.

 William:
A very well done paper, though there are a few places in the language that can be improved. A lot of repetition of phrases and sentence structures make for a slightly confusing read. Other than that, though, everything is really good.

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