Intro + Methods
Introduction
Mainstream media ― from books to movies and everything in between ― once ruled by
heterosexual white able-bodied men, has, in recent years, begun considerably increasing the
representation of minority groups such as women, people of color, queer individuals, and those
with disabilities. In order for this representation to continue, though, the majority group must
approve of the minority presence. While the media may be more diverse than ever, it is still very
much controlled by those heterosexual white able-bodied men. Many of these men do not believe
diverse representation to be important, and several others present diversity in an unfortunately
negative and minimalistic way.
heterosexual white able-bodied men, has, in recent years, begun considerably increasing the
representation of minority groups such as women, people of color, queer individuals, and those
with disabilities. In order for this representation to continue, though, the majority group must
approve of the minority presence. While the media may be more diverse than ever, it is still very
much controlled by those heterosexual white able-bodied men. Many of these men do not believe
diverse representation to be important, and several others present diversity in an unfortunately
negative and minimalistic way.
I believe that diversity is an intrinsic part of popular media as well as something that should be
sought out for reasons other than fulfilling a quota that the creators do not care about anyway.
The media should allow every-day diversity to infiltrate its historically prejudiced content in a
way that is neither forced nor the butt of a microaggression. So many people look up to fictional
characters in film and writing, and it is so discouraging to never see someone like you in the
media but so much of one type of person that you’re nothing like. Representation in the media
should be common and natural.
sought out for reasons other than fulfilling a quota that the creators do not care about anyway.
The media should allow every-day diversity to infiltrate its historically prejudiced content in a
way that is neither forced nor the butt of a microaggression. So many people look up to fictional
characters in film and writing, and it is so discouraging to never see someone like you in the
media but so much of one type of person that you’re nothing like. Representation in the media
should be common and natural.
Methods
Participants: Students from the University of Iowa Honors Rhetoric (RHET:1030:0049) class and
students from the University of Iowa All-In LLC partook in a survey while several members from both
were interviewed.
students from the University of Iowa All-In LLC partook in a survey while several members from both
were interviewed.
Procedure: Those who took the survey answered questions that determined whether they themselves
were part of the majority or minority then responded to questions regarding their stance on minority
representation in the media. Those who were interviewed discussed their personal experiences with
media diversity in more detail.
were part of the majority or minority then responded to questions regarding their stance on minority
representation in the media. Those who were interviewed discussed their personal experiences with
media diversity in more detail.
Data Analysis: The answers of those who were part of the majority were separated from those who
were part of the minority and converted into charts for easier comparisons. The essay-question answers
and interviews were then compared to the charts.
were part of the minority and converted into charts for easier comparisons. The essay-question answers
and interviews were then compared to the charts.
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